I hoped this would be an interesting, empathic back-and-forth, but I can’t pull a cogent assertion out of your response(s).

Here’s some advice: your position is weakened to the point of non-existence by the absolutes, adverbs, qualifiers, redirects and assumptions in your writing. Eliminate them.

As it stands, you’re debating a phantom of your own creation…and ineffectively.

IOW: People can’t hear what you’re saying because of all the noise.

Try again without the accouterments. I’ll be happy to take a look.

Mama, writer, lover, fighter — I wear my heart on my sleeve because my pants pockets are too small. www.ajkaywriter.com

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